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Old 8th July 2008   #10 (permalink)
lefty013
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Default Re: A Vampire Novel [not finished yet read along as i post please i suggest bookmarki

It's just nothing special. It's too abrupt and, no offence (I'm seriously just trying to be constructive), but it's downright amatuer.
And I also hate the contrast between the names of the sisters: Diamond and Amy. They are two horribly pretentious names and in conjunction, it makes me gag.
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