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hannahjuly wrote:
Once, there were 3 goth girls -- and they still are here today. They are 16 years old.
They ran into an alley to gossip about the grim reaper bad boys. All bones & no flesh. That's why they wore cloaks. Georgina was eating a pig's leg, all the blood was everywhere. Suddenly, A GINORMOUS(sp?) mosquito flew above their heads.
"They're coming to suck our blood," said Gothette.
"Cool," replied Goregina.
"I OWN a sniper," Bona said. "But I left it at home." 
"You left it at HOME?!" yelled Gothette. She quickly pulled out some blood smelling salts & rot smelling bug killer. The mosquito turned into a Demon wolf, but Georgina ate that too. (The Demon Wolf) Gothette hissed at Georgina, showing her fangs. She turned into a bat & bit Georgina's shoulder as hard as she possibly could.
"Yum, more food," Georgina said as she licked the blood of her shoulder. Gothette growled angrilly.
"SHUT UP!!!" Bona bellowed in anger.
"It's daytime!" Bona yelled.
"QUICK! GO TO OUR COFFINS!!!" Goregina yelled!
What happens next? Well you'll just have to find out won't you?!
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I fixed your mistakes. Please try to make it more presentable next time.
Anyways, continue. It's interesting.