 Re: Goth Girls
Although I like the bad names, the story doesn't eall have any build up and there's pretty terrible grammar all the way through... Also, just labeling them "three goth girls" then having them do weird things isgoing to insult a LOT of people. Make them something more than that, make them vampires, otherwise this story is pretty shallow and not very good
x.S.x
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