Thread: Bubble Gum(Sequel to 'Tales of a Teenage Soul)
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Old 25th August 2008   #30 (permalink)
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Default Re: Bubble Gum(Sequel to 'Tales of a Teenage Soul)
The dialog is strange and sounds forced.
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