 Re: Nikki --- Book 1, part 1 of chapter one posted. ( PLEASE READ AND COMMENT! )
and everyone in my rowdy kindergarten class were still giddy with the excitement of the holiday. was not were. Everyone was still giddy. You are lumping everyone together so it's not more than one. There's a grammar rule about that I just can't remember it, or I'd tell you lol.
Besides that it isn't too bad. =] continue?
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I live in the writers corner, and i DO corrupt the meez minds with my fruitbasketness =D
I belong to Glass, point blank =)
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