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|  Thinking of You staring at the calm sunset looking at the clouds above they remind me of you and our love staring at the moon i hope i see you soon because i still feel the warmth of ur arms sitting down underneath the stars reminding me of your face and all the fun we had wondering where you are still sitting here underneath the stars my mind is rasing with many questions but not getting any of the answers wondering where you are still sitting here underneath the stars looking up to the dark sky it reminds me of ur eyes and the joy they gave my heart still sitting here underneath the stars i feel the fresh air and how u used to make me care but now your gone and my heart is starting to tear still sitting here underneath the stars | |||||||
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I liked it
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You had a few spelling and grammar problems, and the flow seemed off. I think that if you change 'underneath' to 'beneath,' it might help the flow.
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O please hijy you cry to everything!!!! Lolz, jk jk Quote:
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