[pyrate_pig]

Okay so this is one of my first poems..
so hope you like..
i just started saying random things and noticed that it made sense together.
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Tonight's the night
That you'll fall into my arms...
As I kiss you good night...

-Blayce (Not much I know..)
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You're always in my thoughts,
In my dreams,
As I lay myself to sleep...
I'll dream of you tonight,
and hopefully,
When I wake up,
That you'll finally be with me

-Blayce (Ill add more poems later....Yes i bet these suck.)
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I remember the night
When I first saw you
Do you?
Cause I was sitting on the bench as the snow fell on the ground
You were standing right there
In this very spot,
I'll always remember this spot
In fact I already named it
It was named, "My First Glance At Love."
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I sit here thinking of you
Sketching your face on the pad of paper,
Thinking of you
your far far away
from where I sit in this very corner
In my room
Wishing you were here
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The moon is bright, and shines so bright
Is it just me or I can see your smile
Reflect back the light
From the moon
Could it be,
That your smile is the moon's worst enemy?
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I can't stop calling her
But she didn;t pick up
I can hear her voice already
So sweet, it lights me up
She hasn't picked up
I realize now,
That she moved away and about
Away from me
Away from the love I once had...
For her
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I saw my Jane Doe
She was sitting by the corner store
I winked at her but she never saw
I looked down with regrets of my first lost
I didn't even hear her voice and I already lost her
She was sitting there like nothing happened not even looking at me.
My dream shattered of finding the someone
That perfect someone
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I saw a shooting star
I wished upon it
To meet a girl the next day,
Not just an ordinary girl,
A special girl
A girl who would take my breath away if I just glance at her
A girl who would have my paradise in her eyes
A girl who has the abilities to make me think twice about talking to her
The special someone
Who makes my heart beat for no reason
That's what I wished upon a shooting star
And the star shot across the sky, leaving nothing in its path
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There's something that exists...
Its out there,
Waiting to be found.
It has everything anyone would ever want.
It's past the Earth,
Past the stars,moon,sun.
It has the beauty of Earth,
And it's smile is brighter than the stars, moon, and sun combined
It's out there,
And I think I just found it.
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[mia_so_sassy]

They are good for your first poems if u think about wat it means its deep

[pyrate_pig]

Yay finally some feedback and thanks..
Im gonna add a few more..

[hij4eva]

That was so touching are you shore its your first time cuz thats deeb

[pyrate_pig]

Yeah :o

[33yor3]

I like the 3rd, 8th & 9th ;D

[t_m_j]

WOW DAT WAZ GUD

[ambersis]

Wow that was beautiful