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Old 1 Week Ago   #1 (permalink)
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Default Peace Not War

Oh, why shall people live,
This horrid time...
They call life,
If they can't live...
without peace just once.
Innocence is found,
In many children's eyes...
The eyes are pleading not to kill,
But they do anyways.
What's so great about life,
If it's wasted on just one fight?

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I like it.
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The lines don't lead to the next in a logical way.
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