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Old 14th November 2009   #1 (permalink)
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Rightarrow Icon He Will Proceed

I wrote this for my Mysteries and Suspense class in school. I liked how it turned out. Please share your opinions.

He Will Proceed

He says it is a need
But others call it greed
His desire for which he must feed
On his victims who bleed
While they cry out and plead
The looks on their faces so easy to read
Staring helplessly, wishing to be freed
The death of his victims, they will concede
As the tragic fate of his dark deed
Watch for him. He will not recede

-Jamie

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