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| Chapter 1 I smiled broadly, as I walked with Kylie down the street. Today was the day we got to see Nate and Craig. The two brothers I loved, but truthfully, I had fallen for Nate, long ago, I just couldn’t believe he wanted me to be around him. I got nervous just thinking about it. “Jalie!” Kylie shouted, pulling me back on the sidewalk. “Oh, what?” I looked at her, as she shook her head. “Stop spacing, we’re almost there.” I smiled, and pumped my fist in the air. “I get to see Nate!” “I get Craig.” She smiled. We both laughed. “Pssh, what about your man,” I cocked a brow at her. “You know, Jake?” Kylie laughed again, and smirked at me. “Well, he thinks I’m at home right now… “She looked down the street, and back at me. I shook my head, “Don’t do anything stupid.” “I won’t, I don’t want to lose Jake.” She tucked her platinum blonde hair behind her ear. I shook my head, laughing, my bronze hair falling in my face. “Well, you know you and Blake are gonna get back together, right?” She asked. I stared at her. “I dunno….” I looked over, the apartments towered over us. “You will, trust me.” I smirked, and turned into the buildings. “Tell him we’re here.” We knocked on the door, happy as can be. A woman with long hair answered the door. “You here for Nate and Craig?” She asked. We nodded. “Yep…” I grinned. “C’mon in.” Kylie smiled, as Craig ran outside. He gave me a quick hug, then grabbed the bag I carried. “Mother, I got your stuff.” He smiled at me. I cocked a brow, and Kylie looked at me. “What the eff?” I laughed. Kylie walked inside, and so did I. “Nate, Come down here!” Craig yelled up the stairs. “In a minute!” Nate yelled back. “But you got some visitors!” Nate came down, and stopped seeing us there. He stared at me for a moment, making me blush, than turned to Craig. “Let’s go swimming!” He flipped his blond hair out of his blue eyes. I looked at what he was wearing, just swim trunks. I blushed, and looked down. “You too.” He pointed at Kylie and I. I nodded and looked at him. Kylie and I went outside, and towards the pool, Nate and Craig followed behind. I bit my lip, trying to get my mind off of Nates' bare chest. “Gate’s locked!” Kylie yelled at Nate. Nate nodded, and walked pass me, brushing against me as he did so. I blushed, and looked down, as he unlocked the gate. We walked into the pool area, and I stepped to the side, leaning against the gate. “You know, it’d help if you swam.” Nate stated, as he swam away from me. I rolled my eyes, and shrugged. “I am insecure, no clothes off, not going in!” I yelled back. “Well, if you were my friend you’d come swimming, with your bathing suite on!” I glared at him, and tugged at the hem of my skinny jeans. “But, I don’t wanna take off my clothes.” I whined. Kylie smiled. “Me either!” She yelped. “C’mon!” Nate cried,, Craig laughed. “No, I’m fat!” I crossed my arms. Nate glared at me, and Kylie grabbed my arm, tugging me towards the pool. “No, lemme take off my converse!” Kylie allowed me to do so, and then threw me in the pool. I glared at her, than took off my pants under water. Craig shoved Kylie in, and ran off. I went under water and took off my shirt, so now I was in my bikini. Kylie laughed, as I threw my clothes out of the pool. Nate looked at me. “You got my clothes off now!” His eyes widened. “That… sounded bad,” I bit my lip, and swam up to him. After being dunked repeatedly by Nate, I climbed out, and sat in the hot tub with Craig. “Your little brother is nicer!” I yelled, as I got comfortable. Nate ran out of the pool, and jumped into the hot tub. I screamed, causing them to laugh. Kylie sat next to me, and Nate sat on the other side, and repeatedly touched my thigh. I laughed, as he pulled me next to him. “Jalie.” Kylie looked at me, as Nate put his hands on my hips, pulling me towards him. I had only been around him for an hour, after not seeing him for a year, and he couldn’t keep his hands off me. “Huh?” I asked Kylie, as Nate let go, Kylie pulled me to her. “Don’t get too connected with him, he’s leaving again in a month.” “I know…” I sighed. “Okay, as long as you do…” I nodded, and sat down again, Nate pulled me towards him again. I laughed, and grabbed his hand. He stopped pulling me, and looked at me. I smiled, and climbed out, only to have him pull me back in. “No!” I screamed, and ran back out. Nate laughed, and got out. “C’mon Craig grandma’s here!” He moved his arm in front of him, and smiled. I stood there dripping wet with Kylie, till Craig returned with towels, and Nate threw me his. I smiled at them, and walked out of the pool area, with my wet clothes. After Kylie and I got dressed, I sat down on the stairs, Nate telling me to go outside with him. “Make me.” I stated. He walked up to me, and put his face close to mine. “I can make you do a lot of things.” I blinked. “Really?” His lips were less then an inch from mine. “Yeah, but I won’t.” He got up, grabbed my hand, and pulled me along. We sat outside on the railing, behind the apartments, and away from the group of people. I was going nuts over my hair being curly, and not having that long of hair, made me freak out even more. “Jalie, calm down,” Nate stated. I looked at him, and pulled down my hair, trying to straighten it with bare hands. He grabbed my hand, and put it on the bar, still holding it. “What?” I asked, as he stared at me. “Nothing…” He put his other hand on the back of my neck. I stared at him; he played with my hair, and tugged me forward, roughly kissing me. The kiss lasted about a minute, until he backed away. “I’m sorry…” He looked down. I just stared at him. “D-don’t be…” I looked down too. “Was that bad?” he asked. “N-no.” I managed. “How?” “Cause it was you…” I looked at him. He smiled, and grabbed my hands, pulling me closer, and kissing me again. I pulled away quickly. “What?” He asked. “They might come around….” I said hitching my thumb over my shoulder. “Don’t worry.” He kissed me again, and I kissed him back. I pulled away slowly, and stared at him. He backed away. “Do you not want me to kiss you?” “I-it’s not that… I’m just, paranoid… ya know?” Nate looked at me. “Well, I’m happy I don't mean ‘happy’ just actually happy.” I smiled, “Me too.” I stood up, and ran to the side of the building, Kylie telling me we had to leave in ten minutes. I nodded, “Ok!” Nate told me to come back, so I walked to him. “Yea?” “I got a secret for you.” “Okay, spill.” “Come here.” He smirked. I leaned in, “what?” “This…” He leaned up and kissed me, his mouth gapped open slightly, as did mine. We slowly started to make out, then hearing the voices of the others, I pulled away. ------ Authors Note: This story is actually True. This happened to me over the summer. There's gonna be PLENTY of drama.
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Well here's the background; Over the summer a guy I fell for, about two years ago, came back. We went out before, and then a lot of bull shyyt happened, and he moved. After that we didn't talk for a while. When we started to talk again, feelings started to develop. Then he came back... For a month. This is basically going to be all about that. It's drama. Romance. Heart break. Love. and just the good ol' teenage life!
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I giggled like a little schoolgirl xD More soon I hope :3
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WOO! Another story from youu ;D I was wondering when it would happen, haha. It's great, sounds dramatic already. XD
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I'm sorry but i happen to like His Imperfection better... Sorry... Not that this Story is bad! It's actually pretty good but i just prefer your other story better...
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The funny thing is this is a True one
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Honestly, I couldn't get past the first paragraph. There's too much dialouge, not enough description. And I suggest that you don't change the font so much. It really does make it hard on your readers' eyes. Since I didn't really get very far, I don't have anything else to say about the story. :/
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Its very interesting ...continue please
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