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| The party wasn't much fun, without my friends being there. It was a complete dud. The drive home was so quiet. I just wanted to yell, hopefully piercing the silence. But, that was unnessary and it was also my birthday. Robby interrupted my thoughts. "So how was the birthday party little bro?" Of course he just had to ask that question. Should I be honest, or just give him what he wants to hear? His eyes waited anxiously for my response. "It was a pretty kick a$$ party!" I smiled. I wasn't entirely lying. I mean, I'd have to admit, that party rocked and all, just not so much afterwards. "Good to hear! How about we stop up at Pizza Hut and order us a couple of boxes?" Robby said with a wink. I shrugged, and rolled my eyes. "Haven't we had enough pizza at the party?" I smiled. "Ah, thats right. I always forget you eat like an animal." He chuckled and nudged the brim of my arm. After a few minutes of agonizing silence, he finally pulled the car up into the slick driveway. I shot out of the car, once it came to its complete halt, then rushed up into my bedroom. I snapped open my laptop, to have it chime the usual tone of a New IM. It was from Amber. Amber- Jerrod Skogen!! Talk 2 me now! Amber- I no ur there! I slowly skidded my fingers across the keyboard. Jerrod- Why? So u can yell @ me again? Amber is typing... Amber- Finally u talk! And no! I had reason to. Jerrod- Which is? Amber- T.R.O.U.B.L.E. she is NOT ur type! Ugly 1 too. E.W. And then it happened. **Click** Amber was officially BLOCKED. I closed the laptop, and headed off to close the window. And then there it was. The most frightening thing I had ever seen. An envelope on the back of the glass.
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XD i know rite? I think your the only one reading it SO FAR.
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| I carefully opened the window. A wave of cold air rushed into my face. I reached my arm out for the taped envelope, then stopped. What if this was some kind of bomb? Or better yet..Amber trying to scare me off. Augh. Who cares. What could happen? I slowly, but carefully snatched the envelope into my hands, and tore off the top. A piece of paper was folded up and was marked. Jerrod. I gently unfolded the paper. This is what it said : ![]() Bubbles!! Out of all the people! My night couldn't possible get any better! What kind of parents does she have anyway? Tracks everyone she contacts. Definately some creepers. Weird. So, I'm meeting her at the elementry school playground this Friday. I can't believe it! I definately picked the right clover.
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I cant wait and read what happens at the park im kind of liking bubbles better then amber
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| **Friday** The warm sun slipped through my curtains glaring the light into my face. I ripped my navy blue blankets off and headed for the shower. This was the day. The day I would show Bubbles how I really felt. I know, I fall for people so easily. But maybe, just maybe, she'd feel the same way. I jumped over my Buzz Light Year toy I got 5 Christmas's ago. I remember how my mom would always bake ginger bread cookies for the whole family. I use to snatch two of them up, and pretend they were me and Amber. I was for sure, a strange kid. A strange kid who was desperately in love with Amber. With her green eyes, beautiful smile, and everything else to match. I smiled silently in my head as I opened the bathroom door. Wait! What was I thinking?! No no no! I like Bubbles! God, it's just so weird, I can never get past my feelings for Amber. Deep down in my heart, rests my love for her. I sighed. I carefully slipped out of my clothes, and hopped into the shower. The hot steam helped control my thoughts. Another odd trait to my life. If I could burst out of my skin, I probably would. My need to see Bubbles was crazy. What was I even going to say? "Hey Bubbles!! Yeah I would love to spend the rest of my life with you! Will you be my girlfriend?" Ha. That would go by well. What would Amber say? "Why Jerrod?" Amber's sad eyes would run away from me forever. Not trusting, never forgiving. I make so many mistakes. If I ever went out with Bubbles, there would be a large possibility of my friendship with Amber lost. God, why was she so stubborn? Every girl I like she freaks out!! Thats funny, I can't remember when I didn't like another girl. Except now. Bubbles perfect features. Her pale skin, against her fair hair. SH*T!! I hadn't noticed the water turned ice cold. I ran out and quickly grabbed a towel.
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A little average, but your writing isn't bad. Space your paragraphs.
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| do u have a link to it? Quote:
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