[sweetzz_]

im posting this story again,since the other one is long gone. Anyway read it,enjoy,and comment.thanks :]
i changed the title too because the old title didn't feel right.and i finally am finishing the story; it may be long,but yeah :]
since last log in there are a total of: six chapters

Proulouge: Spencer is always the new girl,the new popular girl because of her famous mom. Spencer has never found love before,but in this small town of Rowds, she will. But throughtout all of it,her lovers secret gets revealed.Will she stay living with him,or die without?

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“no title yet”
By me :]

Chapter One: New
It was a very sunny day for September. It usually is all cloudy and gloomy-like,but today it wasn't.It was really strange because here at Rowds,it seemed like it was December everyday.The town was awfully small;it had a population of 352 people. This annoyed me very much for some odd reason.
Today,is the first day of school,and guess what? Im new to this town and this school. Lucky me. I quickly got dressed into a black Batman logo t-shirt and my grey skinny jeans.My medium/long hair was perfectly straight and put up into a ponytail. I addedd some bracelets,earrings, and of course,my some what lucky black Converse.
"Spencer! Hurry up,we might be late!"My mom shouted from downstairs.It was her first day working at the hospital,and she wanted to be right on time.
"Mom-I'm right here." She glanced at me.
"Okay,lets go." My mother grabbed her bag and went straight for the door.
I simply grabbed my baige messenger back and sat in the passanger seat of the car. It didn't take us long to go to the school.It kinda took us five minutes, but then again, this was a small town. I looked out the window and felt the same way I did in July when I moved here. It seemed pretty gloomy,I thought, but perfect. The enviroment made me feel happy and relaxed, but sometimes I felt as if somebody was watching me.
"Have fun,Spence."My mother said smiling to me.
"I'll be fine,mom." I smiled,my bright white teeth shining, as I slowly walked away.
The bell didn'r ring yet,so it gave me time to head to the office. The new school was... Nice. I have never been in here before, but that warm,fresh feeling made me feel as if I had. I asked a girl where the office was, and she just laughed and kept on walking. Confused,I kept on walking to.I looked back and that same girl was still laughing,when something happened. I bumped into him. His skin was natural and his eyes were so dark but amazing.His lips seemed chapped,but thats what made you want to kiss him. He was a God,one I may never see again.I stood there froze looking at his wonderful face. He froze,too,shocked a bit.
"Oh umm...er...Im sorry," I said, nervous about talking to this boy.
He was also lost in his words. He blinked,but he wouldn't take his eyes off of me. He then,walked. Walked away from me.I turned around,looking at him as he walked by. I didn't know who he was, but he was amazing.Now I wouldn't say it was love at first sight, but it sure felt like.
Without knowing it,a teacher bumped into me,making me drop my bag. He said sorry and he kept on speed walking. This "bump" made me realize, what the hell am I doing in the middle of a crowded hallway?I quickly turned around to see if anyone had noticed that I have been standing there for minutes,and thankfully nobody did. I walked, to the office.I could tell it was the office because it had big words saying OFFICE on the door and hallway.
"Hi." My voice cracked.
"Hello there,can I help you?" The young lady at the desk with the black glasses asked.
"Yeah,um, I am Spencer Newton. I'm -"
"Brooke Newton's daughter?! Oh we are so happy to have your mother in our town. The greatest doctor alive."
"I was going to say that I was new,but yeah,you got it right. My mom,haha ha eh..."
"Oh I'm sorry,where are my manners,"She stood up and shook my hand." Have a seat please."
"Um I'm just here to get my schedule."
"Yes,yes,your schedule.Hold on please." The woman whose name happened to be Alessia, looked through her file,got a slip,then another slip and handed it to me.
"Here this is you schedule, you know how to read them right?"
"Yep."
"Okay well, there it is and here is the map of the school just incase you get lost."
"Thanks very much."
"Oh and here is the bell schedule,too."She handed me another slip.
"Thanks again."
"Good luck at your new school Ms. Newton."
"Spencer is okay." I smiled and walked out of the office.
Each class seemed the same. There was this girl that I already have my first two periods with, and she invited me to have lunch with her. Study Hall ended so I went off to my fourth period class,after that was lunch. I handed the slip to the teacher and he sent me all the way to the back. I stayed quiet and pretended like I never knew this stuff. At my old school in Chicago,we already learned this in tenth grade. This was eleventh grade.
"You're Brooke Newton's daughter,right?"
"Spencer actually.And yes I am her daughter." I hated how people didn't call me by my real name,but no;it was always your her daughter.
"Cool,I'm Kieth,Kieth Tatum. You wanna eat lunch with me and my friends?"
"Oh sorry, I already promised this gir I was going to eat lunch with her."
"Really,who?"
"Jessica,I don't think you kno-"
"Jessica Marin?"
"Yeah."
"Oh cool,we hang out at the same table,you could come with me."
"Sure."
So that was it. I had already made two friends at this new boring school. We ate lunch,blah blah blah. By the time the lunch bell rang,I already knew most of the school, thanks to them. And the whole school,alreay knew me. Thanks to my mother. So much for laying low at this school.
Kieth,Jessica, and a girl named Aileen walked me to fifth period since Jessica had the same class as me. As I walked in I was to shy to look to the class. I handed the teacher the slip and she sent me to the back next to some guy. I smiled at him and began to walk,my face looking down. As I got closer to the back I saw him. With the only avaible seat in the classroom.

Chapter Two:
His structure was godlike and those eyes.His eyes were a reddish color and his tanned skinned seemed oh so perfect. He wouldn't dare to look at me. He turned only once,then turned back as soon as our eyes met. I decided to ask him what was his name,but the coward I was wouldn't do a thing. I was too scared to do anything,thinking something might go wrong between us.I didn't talk to him, but it felt like he was the one for me.In a second,that feeling went away.
The bell rang,and it scared me. Everyone was already out the door, and Jessica was waiting for me. We walked to our last class smiling at everybody,then I stopped. Looking straight at me was him. His eyes were burning into my skin. He looked confused and scared.Oh my gosh I scared him,I thought. I turned,my back facing him, and Jessica and everybody else was around us.
"Spencer!He's looking at you!" Jessica excitedly whispered.
"Who?"
"Toby Montgomery!" She squeled.
I turned back to look and he was Toby.Toby Montgomery. I litteraly flipped back to Jessica,ecstatic of course, but I stayed cool.
"He is the hottest guy in school,"she paused waiting for my response,but I didn't.
"A lot of girls like him, but ever since he broke up with Taylor two months ago,hes been extremely qiuet."
"Wow." Wow it was.
"Wait,he sits next to in fifth!You are so lucky."
"Yeah...eh...I am?"
"You are! You might be the lucky one.I mean look at you,your gorgeous!"
I couldn't say anything to do.Many people did say I was beautiful. People always complimented my hair,structure,skin,everything. My hair was a light,but very nice brown and a bit wavy. My eyes were dark brown but glowed everywhere.I was slender,but curvy. People loved the way I looked,people even said I was fake once.But then they apologized so blah blah blah.
He,Toby,was leaning agaisnt a locker,guys surrounding him,talking about girls. He stayed quiet and stared deeply at me.I only knew this because Jessica was telling me.
Class went by,but I was lost in space.All I could think about was Toby. I had to get over him.Besides Jessica said he hadn't dated since Taylor and him broke up. I knew Taylor. She seemed nice.Her straight blonde hair,blue eyes, and slender body.She was very bubbly and loud and was captian of the cheerleading squad.
The bell finally rang,and I headed out the school's door,passing by the office.
"Hey,how was your first day?"The same lady from the morning asked.
"It was great,thanks." I couldn't think of anything else to say.
I headed out walking slowly home.I took my time to look at the place.The green bushes,trees,grass,everything. I felt wierd suddenly.I felt followed and watched. I turned to the sides,nothing. I turned back, and there he was,again. I simply smiled and kept walking.I walked a bit faster,afraid of him for some odd reason.
"Wait." His voice was better.
I stopped,shocked and stood still. I swear when I saw him,he was like twenty feet away. I turned to him again,and he was nearly two feet away.
"Hi," my voice cracked.
"Your Spencer Newton,"
"Yeah,"my stupid voice cracked again.
"I'm Toby,Toby Montgomery."
"Mhm."
"I sit next to you in chemistry." He waited.I didn't respond.
"Well,maybe we will see each other again?"
"Yeah of course."My voice didn't crack for once.
"Bye."
"Bye."
He walked away,and so did I,happy of course. A black mercedes roared on the street and i honked at me and waved. I could see that it was him becuase I saw the mirror. He smiled at me,his eyes glowing.
I smiled and kept walking home.

Chapter Three:
It was now 8:45 P.M and my mother was barely coming through the front door. I didn't mind her coming her late,she was a famous doctor. I was in the kitchen eating my bowl of lasanga that I made for us when she came in.I heard her car,then footsteps as she was coming in.
"Hey,Spence?" her voice was tired,but excited too.
"Yeah mom?"my mouth was full of food.
"How was school?" she asked as she sat down grabbing a plate.
"Fine mom." I lied.It was better than fine.
"Any new friends?"here she goes with the friends.
"Yeah,a few," I lied again."So how was work?"
"Perfect!I have my own office,everybody was so nice and they kept saying stuff like..."
I couldn't here her voice anymore.She didn't trail off,because her lips were still moving. There was one thing I heard,his voice in my ear.I wasn't paying attention to my mom at all,but it seemed like I was.
"...and yeah.That's it." She finished just when I "returned".
"Really,mom?Thats great." I finished my bowl and headed upstairs.
"Im going to my room,I need to clean in there.You relax mom,kay?"
"Sure honey." We exchanged smiles and I was off to the stairs.
My room was big enough for me. It had a large balcony and a few windows. The balcony was the perfect place for me to relax,and for me to escape. I always laughed at that though because I knew that would never happen. I had a small coffe tanned coffe table and dark blue couch with something covering everything when it rained.My room was a tad different.At the windows,I had little plants or frames. My bed was a twin size purple bed.The closet was a walk-in closet,so that was something different. I had a book shelf, a desk with my computer and laptop on it. Two bean bag chairs and another closet filled with other necessities.It wasn't walk in though. It was beside my elegant vanity table and the matching chair.
When I got to my room, put on my pj's,brushed my hair and teeth,then sat on my bed, my laptop in my hands. I went on the school website and looked for Toby Montgomery.Nothing came out.I looked at the page where the had a mini yearbook. It had the pictures and names of all the students. I scrolled and scrolled,nothing. Then I found him. He looked the same,but he was the better looking in real life.I search for all the other kids I met today,and there they were.
I woke up in the middle of the night,and as always,it was raining.I looked out the balcony door and you could see the lightning.I got up and when I was going to close the curtains,I saw something strange. That thing was standing there looking straight at me,ready to eat and kill. I didn't know what to do,I was too scared to do anything. I looked closey,and as I did,he grew darker,but his eyes beaming at me.I gulped and was really close to fainting.I closed the curtains almost ripping them and locked all the windows. I ran out of the room and into my moms'.
"Mom!Mom!Mom!Wake up!" I shooked her so hard,I slapped her by accident.
"Spencer what the h-"
"Mom!There is something in my balcony. It eyes where glowing and starring right at me!He looked like a killer mom!" I cut her off.
"Spence,this is ridiculous,there is nothing there,trust me."
We walked,or should I say, I dragged her to my balcony,running. I opened the curtains. To my surprise,nothing was there.I gasped.
"See,Spence,just go to sleep."
"How can I go to sleep when I saw something in my balcony!"I yelled.
"Maybe it was a bad dream.Sweety just go to sleep."
She put me in my bed and kissed me.Oh,how I felt like a little kid at this moment. She walked out the door said goodnight and off to sleep. I couldn't help myself but to look at the balcony the whole night.I was scared,of course, but couldn't keep my eyes off of it.
A lound thunder made me jump and as the lightning lit up the room a bit,the figure's shadow was there.



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I know that the begining is very like Twilight be Stephenie Meyer, but I was extremely inspired by the books.
Please give comments, I accept any kind, and tell other people.
THANKS FOR READING :]

[smileychik_100]

That was alot in one post,
I think you should have shortened it down,
to maybe 1 or two chapters each post =)
other then that I like the story

[sweetzz_]

I know that it's long and everything, but just please read it.
I can cut it down to three chapters then I'll add each chapter.
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[bubbles223]

Too long. I get intimidated by long posts

[lightinthedark]

0.0 I loved it is there more?