[heartbreaker19]

She lurks in the sky,
when the moon is still high,
searching for prey,
for she sleeps in the day,


Her eyes chocolate brown,
on her face,
she always wears a frown,
her lips thin and pink,
her skin white and cold,


her hair brown with a light touch of gold.


She is the mid-night fairy,
no. She's not that scary,
She looks as though a child,
so sweet and so mild,


when she cries,
the sea rises,
when she smiles,
so many surprises!


When she laughs,
a whole town laughs,
when she sleeps,
half the earth sleeps,
when she dies...
the whole world dies.

[red-rose08]

Nice I like it...

[zayleus]

It's rather simple, but I liked it.

[lefty013]

It's got a sort of simple beauty about it. Very nice.

[smileychik_100]

Yeah the rhyme scheme is simple,
I knew Frown was coming after Brown lol
but its nice

[red-rose08]

smileychik_100 wrote: Yeah the rhyme scheme is simple, I knew Frown was coming after Brown lol but its nice

Ya I wouldn't have been able to think of a better word to come after brown either so don't feel bad! Ha ha