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Old 20th February 2009   #1 (permalink)
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Prologue

She was rich, she was beautiful, she was abused. The girl walked through the halls strutting so gracefully it was impossible to see through her clear eyes. But if you looked d
eep you could see the pain, the grief, the betrayal. And most of all the hatred. That's why she haunts us, through mirrors. And no, she's not Bloody Mary, she's worse; she's Maria.

Chapter 1

Emptiness
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Amanda sat in the Lotus position on the hard couch in the attic. She wasn't really meditating, just making OMMM noises and crossing her legs in an uncomfortable style. A mirror stood infront of her, a crack rippled through the middle. It looked like a jagged lightning bolt as it struck it's next victim; the glass.

"OMMMMMM." She hummed, her breathing deep and even. Slowly she began to rise off the couch, a normal happening for her.
"Amanda?" Amanda's mother, Claire, walked up the stairs. Opening doors and peering inside to each one as she made her way to the attic, she could hear Amanda meditating, a normal happening. The only time Amanda wasn't an empty cold stone.

"Yeah?" Amanda called back, interupting her floating as she landed on the couch with a thud. She got up and brushed dirt off the seat of her jeans.

"It's dinner time, honey." Claire tried hard to be sweet, but it was harder then it seemed to not erupt from her daughters emptiness.

"Coming." Amanda rose from the couch and walked robotically to meet Claire. She was already heading back to the Dining Room to check on the dinner.

"Here Sweetpea." Her Mother set a bowl of chilli infront of her daughter. Bringing over a bowl for herself, Claire sat down accross from her daughter. "So how was school?"
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"Fine." Amanda replied, in a tone that said not to press the subject.

"What did ya do?" Claire pressed anyway.

"Nothing."

Claire sighed, she felt like screaming. But, of course, she kept her mouth shut.

" 'Scuse me." Amanda pushed herself away from the table and walked to her room. Not once changing her robotically slow pace. She opened the door and starting unmaking her twin size bed. Opening another door inside her room, that lead her to her bathroom, she pulled off a shirt and unsnapped her bra. She really didn't need a bra, sixteen and no breasts. That was just sad. Amanda turned the dials inside the shower, making the water fall out warmly, stripping off her jeans and underwear she stepped under the hot water.

Amanda got out and dried herself, pulled on a robe, and wrapped her long auburn hair into a towel. Frowning she walked back into her bedroom.
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Good I like this. You must go on.
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Keep going. Its good so far. I wanna see more.
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http://help.com/user-avatars/user-photo-76147-54789.jpg

Copy and paste ink into browser to see what Amanda looks like...
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Girl I love it, but
if you don't stop
starting so many stories
I'm going to hurt you. Please
anyways I like the story go on
...with all of them, because I love all of them
if you need an help on how to keep the story going
for some time without stopping it just ask me and I'll tell!
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Here's Claire

http://www.the-other-mother.com/imag...her-Mother.jpg
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Right now I'm basically focusing on Stepmum? No. StepMumster and this one.
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Chapter 2
The Happening

Amanda unwrapped her now dry hair, shaking it out, then running a brush through it. She gave her mirror reflection a half smile, almost perfect she thought to herself. Pulling on pants and a shirt she hurried to give Claire a kiss goodnight. "Night Mommy." She gave her mother a hug and kiss and walked back to her room.

"Ok. Mom will probably be asleep by 12:30 p.m., so that gives me a hour to sleep and thirty minutes to get ready." Amanda murmured to herself I pulled the covers over my head and let my eyelids close.

I woke up around twelve ten. "Oh crap!" Amanda whispered, "I should be getting ready right now." She opened her closet and pulled a red dress out, sighing she pulled it on. It hugged her upper body, the red velvet stuck to her body all the way to her hips then exploded in a mass of red fabric. Amanda pulled her hair into a sophisticated bun, shoved in red earrings, a pearl necklace, and pulled red high heals onto her feet. Then she hurried into the attic. "Ahh-ahh." Amanda slapped a sweaty palm against her mouth, preventing a sneeze.

"You're earlier then I thought." A voice cackled. Amanda whirled around.

"Hello Maria." She faced the mirror staring into the eyes of the once beautiful face of Maria.

"So how has life been since last night?" Maria asked, her voice mocking.

Once brave Amanda was now scared. She hated when Maria tried to act casual. It only frightened her more, "F-f-fine. W-w-what do ya want f-f-f-from me?"

"Tonight it'll be easy. An enemy of yours. Keisha Burlings."

Amanda could imagine Keisha's pretty face contorted in horror as she was faced with death. Taking a deep breath Amanda nodded, "Of course. As you wish." Amanda dug under the couch and pulled out a dagger, covered in dried blood. Almost floating out the door Amanda hurried as fast as a girl could hurry in heels to the mansion of Miss. Keisha Burlings.


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