[lindsayx159]

Title: Out of Order
Rating: 18+ (sex, alcohol)
CAUTION: Homosexual pairings
POV: Dougie Poynter, 1st Person
Summary: Read... If you don't like that whole stereotypical high school theme, then you can stop here. (: If you do, then continue on love, and enjoy!

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Dougie Poynter, Danny Jones

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[lindsayx159]

CHAPTER ONE

Besides the gentle, low hum coming from my fan, there was silence. Though most guys would see that as an ‘all clear’, I could still feel that stomach turning sensation of anxiousness to open my eyes. I was laying on my side, stark naked under the covers as I made one final wish before the moment of truth. Then finally, I snapped my eyes open quickly, sort of like you would rip off a band-aid.

The other side of my bed was empty, and I heaved a sigh of relief. Another successful night to add to my lucky streak. I hadn’t suspected a good outcome to this morning, seeing as...- Samantha? Had that been her name? Whatever, it wasn’t important. But she had been the fourth one this week, and usually after the third in a row, I got stuck with a clingy one.

Fortunately, that hadn’t happened today. As I kicked my sheets off to get out of bed, I grabbed a glance at my clock. It read only 6:10 in the morning in the middle, and the date, September 3rd, in the corner. I ruffled my hair with both my hands as I made my way over to my bathroom, which was connected to my room. The first day of school had finally arrived, and like most teenagers, I wasn’t happy about it.

I’m not saying that I’m like ‘most teenagers‘. Unless ‘most teenagers’ spend their time ****ing random strangers, then yeah, I’m pretty average. After flipping on the light in my bathroom, I stared at my reflection. I didn’t look that horrible, minus the pimples and outgrown hair. After taking a wee and giving myself a couple of sniffs, I decided that a shower wasn’t necessary, and moved on out of the bathroom.

So, about that whole banging strangers thing, it’s not like I’m a *****. Guys can be whores, though, can’t they? Anywho, I don’t really know how I first got to doing it, I just sort of, did. No one, as far as I know, would even guess that I’m not a virgin. Not a lot of people even take the time to get to know me, actually. They think I’m a loner, but hell, they don’t even have the brains to figure out that they can change that by trying to be my friend.

After tugging on a pair of worn jean skinnies and a grey hoodie, I shuffled over to my desk and pulled open a couple of the drawers. As I searched for some kind of notebook and a pen, I began to wonder about how today was going to go. Would I be fortunate enough to survive unnoticed, or perhaps even do the unthinkable- have a friendly conversation with someone? When I finally found an old sketch pad and a chewed up Bic erasable pen, I sighed. I could only hope for a good outcome, because with the life that I led, good fortune never lasted long.

Soon I was trudging out of my bedroom, hungrily walking towards the kitchen. Just as I assumed, my mum wasn’t awake yet. I don’t think my mum knows about my nighttime activities, and hell, I don’t even think she’d care if she did. My bedroom’s on the first floor, and she’s usually asleep during the hours that the girls come and go.

I pulled two individually packed packages of crisps from the cupboard, and after seeing that the time was now 6:30, made my way towards the front door. As I crunched on my breakfast, I suddenly began to feel worried. For what reason, I didn’t know, it just popped out of nowhere. It wasn’t like school was going to be any different, and I wasn’t worried about my mum learning about my secret life. Exasperatedly, I rolled my eyes at myself. I pushed the feeling to the back of my head, where I pushed almost every feeling I had that wasn’t sexual pleasure.
What need was there for any other feeling?

[guiltofliving41]

It's amazing, and I'm not too keen on stories that show the people beforehand. I guess I'm sort of a sucker for imagining what the characters look like myself. But, your writing style and the plot is very intriguing. You should definitely continue.

[lindsayx159]

guiltofliving41 wrote: It's amazing, and I'm not too keen on stories that show the people beforehand. I guess I'm sort of a sucker for imagining what the characters look like myself. But, your writing style and the plot is very intriguing. You should definitely continue.

Thanks for the lovely comment!
Ah, and I'm sorry about spoiling that for you, I really get into my stories with character pictures and everything. If you haven't watched the trailer yet, then I recommend you don't, you won't be missing out on anything important!

[bleeding-victory]

This is great, love! I don't mind the original high school stories, but I like them with a twist ;P But I guess I'm just a sucker becuase I read the first paragraph and couldn't stop! Please, continue (:

[lindsayx159]

bleeding-victory wrote: This is great, love! I don't mind the original high school stories, but I like them with a twist ;P But I guess I'm just a sucker becuase I read the first paragraph and couldn't stop! Please, continue (:

Haha, good, good! Thanks for commenting, it means so much to me!
I'm going to wait until tomorrow to post the next chapter.

[bleeding-victory]

Aww haha but i guess i could wait... Would you mind reading mine? It's called Nightmare? No. Reality.

[lindsayx159]

Of course. I'm over there right now, have to pause my movie so that I can read, haha! I'm a slow reader, but I'll finish in a bit!

[bleeding-victory]

Yay!! LOL haha thanks love ;P

[drzfynest93]

I really like it! This is the second story that I've read from you & I am in love with your writing style! More Por favor!!!