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Old 8th August 2009   #1 (permalink)
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These are the three main characters for my story!


Kristi Allen (Special K)((nickname from Brandon))


Brandon Logan (Fluffy)

Christopher Ryan (Chris)


Sub-Characters-

Romeito Rodriguez (Romeo)

Still writing the first bit of the story I'm going to post...just wanted to get this out of the way before I forgot to...


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Hm...the characters r intersting i want 2 c the story
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If you want I could pm u the itsy bit of the begining...
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I need an opinion
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Well...here goes
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Kristi_Kalico is now online...
Kristi logged into her instant messanger and waited for her friend to log on. She wish she had a name to call him but he would never give one. She sighed tapping her fingers on the desk as she stared at the screen. Ding! finally she'd heard the sound she'd waited for, he was online. Prince_of_the_night is online... She smiled as he messaged her. Hey gorgeous was the first thing that popped up on the screen. I told you not to call me gorgeous! she teased with a smile. Sorry..but it's true.. he replied. See now that's not fair!..you know what I look like but I don't know what you look like..can't you tell me who you are?! she tried once again to get him to tell her who he was. No...I've told you before..you won't like the person you get...trust me.. was what popped up on the screen next. She sighed and typed back You don't know that...I'm not that terrible of a person...am i?! . No..you aren't...you're a wonderful, sweet, beautiful person...but I'm not...he replied, she sighed soflty and replied, I bet you are...oh well..I know how much you hate this subject..so I'll change it.....how was your day? It took a moment for a response, It was wonderful...I got to see you in that wonderful outfit of yours...your cute little skirt with the chains on it. She blushed and smiled soflty now now..don't go making me blush.. she typed. haha sorry m'lady...he replied. "KRISTI IT'S TIME FOR DINNER!" her mother called from downstairs. well I have to go..mom's got dinner ready... she typed. alright..I'll see you tomorrow my kalico... he replied. She logged off and went downstairs for dinner. "Hey mom.." she smiled and sat at the table. "Hello sweetheart.." her mother said as she accompanied her at the table "How was your day?". Kristi shrugged as she started to eat her beans "It was okay...Chris almost got into a fight today and Mr. Charleston gave us another pop quiz..I think I failed it.." Her mother sighed "Well Chris it trouble and for the quiz...I have faith you did fine..you were always good at Science...". Kristi swallowed and looked at her mother "Mom..when are you going to stop talking so bad about Chris..he makes me happy...I like being with him.." her mother scoffed at this and took another bite then said "You know..Brandon would be so much better than Chris..why don't you date him...I think he has the hots for you..". Kristi rolled her eyes and took a drink "Brandon treats me like a sister...we aren't that way..".


I shall post more later or monday..cuz i won't be on tomorrow..so post some opinions..but please don't be harsh..I don't usually write stuff..I just so happened to start writing last night

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I like it...
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Itz magnificant i cannot wait to here the rest it seems lik this story is gunna rock!
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Thanks guys..I'm writing more right now..
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Kristi finished dinner and went back upstairs and got ready for bed. She looked at her computer and sighed soflty "One day..." she muttered then got ready for her "fun". She went to the window inbetween her house and the house next door and flashed her flashlight four times then got a three flash reply and she opened her window "What's up fluffy?!". Her neighbor and life long best friend Brandon was in his window "Nothin much Special K..." She giggled in response and sighed "Still no results B..." she looked at him. Brandon sighed "Awwww....It'll be okay Special K...he's just a guy over the internet..." when she sighed he said "Honestly what's so wonderful about him...". She smiled softly "He's....really nice...it's like me knows me...he can understand me...and he makes me laugh.." when she realized she'd started looking down she looked up to see Brandon staring at her smiling soflty "What?!" she giggled. Brandon smiled laughing soflty "Nothin..sounds like you really like this guy.." when she shrugged he laughed softly again "It's okay Special K...how bout I try and help you find him tomorrow at school..." she nodded and smiled "Thanks Fluffy..."He nodded as they seem to come to a silent agreement that it was bedtime. She blew him a kiss and he caught it mixing his kiss with it and throwing it back "Night Flufy.." she smiled as she caught his kiss. He nodded and said "Sleep tight Special K..." before shutting his window. Kristi shut her window and settled into bed turning out her light and drifting into dream land....

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