[beyondxxbirthday]

Hmmmm... Shortishrimp, I read the beginning of "Birdless Sky"... Just a bit of the first post.
And, to be honest, it has potential, but like Fungirl said, it's not the best. I think I also found it a bit repetetive, but I can't remember...

[fungirla912]

beyondxxbirthday wrote: Woo! (Oh, yeah... This is ruexxinjection on another account... :3) Sorry, pretending to be a newbie is kind of addicting. Still a good thing! Alright, then... Fungirl, you may call me B, BB, Beyond or just Sofie. XD

well then i shall call you BB =]

Obese: be that as it may that doesnt make your comment any better not to mention that it wasn't just on my story..ive seen the things u have to say just in general conversation and it was less than plausible. Neway none of this was really directed toward you and when i made my earlier comment about u being able to be a jerk because ur a good writer wasnt implying that u were cocky about ur writing abilities i was merely mentioning that because you were rather popular that ppl dont mind if u regard them in less than the appropriate mannor simply because of who you are.

--fungirl♥

[annur_lolwut]

..i'm sure Obese wasn't being rude.

perhaps he was just giving you constructive criticism, a bit bluntly.

[enahatesyou]

Wow. This thread sure does put the truth out there.
:[

[shortishrimp]

Birdless Sky is only the sequal to another story I wrote.

[fungirla912]

annur_lolwut wrote: ..i'm sure Obese wasn't being rude. perhaps he was just giving you constructive criticism, a bit bluntly.

and if that had been the case then i would've been completely okay with it but that is not what he did, and he can tell you that himself..he didnt leave a critique for me to get any type of benifit from he left a rather snide and, yes i will say it again, rude remark that was completely unnesisary. Apparently you all seem to think it was out of character so i dont exactly take it personal but its rather annoying to see someone with that type of off-set disposition regarded so highly.

neway im not going to sit here and defend my comment about him. I said already that his work was good despite my personal opinion of him. There really is no need for further debate since thats not what this thread is for.

--fungirl♥

[chicxcouture]

My favorite has to be Indy hands down.
-Muffins
(x_ugly_muffins_x)

[enahatesyou]

I don't know why people are taking it seriously. It's just a critique. Not like anyone called someone's mother a ugly heifer.
JS.

[amazing_zia]

Indy, Zay, and Obese would have to be my regular favorites. There are others I like too, but these three have more than one story/poem that drives me further into insanity. :]

[thc67]

Honestly, I don't think that fungirl, was trying to offend him. I know I wasn't trying to offend Obese. I adore his writing. I believe that we was just saying that even through you may have hurt our feelings, it doesn't matter, because your writing is so brillant, that no matter what you said or would of, we would still read your material. I'm sorry if I offended you Obese.
I honestly understood what you guys were saying. It helped me in many ways, to develop, as a better writer. So I thank you, for your harsh critism.