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Why is your writing so...Breath taking? (Is that one word? I dunno, tried to type it as one but it didn't look right.) I love the flow and your vocabulary choice. Couldn't get better, really. Hope there's more soon!
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I'll post more in a few bumping for now.
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| The school was modeled after a church in the late seventeenth century I was once told. The tall pillars and the way it seemed to stare at you always reminded me of a prison. It was a dark brown color and had windows with designs in every one. It must have taken a while to build. The building reached over two hundred feet I estimated and had about seven floors. I think it was built in 2110 or so. School really was optional but old people said going to school was important to help learn about the past. Everyone was always interested in the past. Ever since the year 2190 people have wanted to replicate the past. What is so important about it? Throwing out new clothes to bring antiques back in style. Tearing down buildings to make them look old. Blowing countries to pieces because one person decided the nuclear bomb was useful. It doesn't really help with the present. There wasn't many places left on earth that was safe. New York was one of the few areas of the former United states left. It was apart of Valcima. Harold Valcima saved New York, New Jersey, and a few other states and claimed him as his own. I always heard through rumors that there was a country that was safe in an area where Florida and a few territories were and that California also declared itself a Country after the United States fell to pieces. History always bored me but I knew enough of it to give a whole life about our continent. Students ran past me as I walked up the steps to the school. They didn't notice me and I didn't notice them. I knew the whole region went to this school but I only knew a small fraction of them. There were so many people that weren't important and that had no interest to me. A few were hanging around the stairs and a few more in the grass. With all the different types of people there were you really could not tell what ethnicity was what unless you asked someone. I knew I was an ethnic they considered a third iranian, a third asian, and third causcasion. There were not many people here that had the same ethnicity. Skin tone wise at least. It wasn't really dark but had a sand color tone.
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Oh! More :]
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