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| Hey handsome. Remember me? Most likely no, hah. Anyhow if I don't respond that means I have left for school.
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(Sorry for the spam Indy.)
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//Subscribed. That's my first subscription ever. Haha.
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I really love this plot line, it's very descriptive, and it sucks the reader into the plot. Nicely done. | |||||||
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Is this something that's coming from the heart?! : D I love how every first sentence in the beginning of your work is so straight foward. It's not like "I looked around the room and saw people." It's so...enticing! Please, do continue.
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