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I think they are hated because they are the only person with a soul. Also, I really enjoy your writing. I occasionally feel what this character feels, just without the bullying. Your writing is superb, and I'll be sure to keep reading (:
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CoolPrincess;; It's a guy.. His name was stated as Joseph in the first chapter... I don't know any girls named Joseph. Why it's called Snow will be revieled in chapter five, okayy?? :] And why Joseph is hated so much. I don't think you read it all, though. Because in chapter four it mentions his gender a few times in the dialogue. That's okay, though. It's a lot to read. :] Topper;; That's half the reason!! =]] Haha. X3 You'll see soon why he is bullying. I'll give you a hint, though: Discrimination. Go from there :] I'm glad you have somewhat of a relation to him. ^^ I'll continue to chapter 5 very soon! =] SuperKitty;; Thank you!! I most definetly will. Thanks for the support, guys. :] | |||||||
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| Re: Snow. <<Repost / Chapter 4>>Will ANYONE read this!? D: Please?!
Gosh, I love this story. But I did find one thing wrong. His name was Gordon-- he wasn't but liked but he was obviously striving for attention by joining in the 'fun'. I hate that I'm only asking for more and not giving you actual criticism, but I can't find anything that needs working on right now, so I'll just say again what I've said in my other posts. Please continue. ^-^
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Thank you so much! ^^ I really appreciate it. :'D AH. Thanks for pointing that out! Knowing me, no matter how many times I would've read it over, I wouldn't have noticed xD :]] I'll definetly start Chapter five tomorrow! Once again, thank you! ^^ | |||||||
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