[m0chi_b00g3r]

Oh my gosh that was really, really nice to read. How do you come up with such beautiful sentences? And i love how you wrote it so that the reader does not know why he is hated so much until just the last part and well, i was surprised, but it was like "that totally makes sense"
AMAZING
do continue

[youeatbugs]

Your comment totally just made my week. :'D Thank you so much!
Haha, personal experiences help. 8D
Once again, thank you so much. >w< <3!!

I will definetly write more soon x3
Right now my brain isn't working properly. X_o

[youeatbugs]

/Bumpers
:B

[m0chi_b00g3r]

youeatbugs wrote: Your comment totally just made my week. :'D Thank you so much! Haha, personal experiences help. 8D Once again, thank you so much. >w< <3!! I will definetly write more soon x3 Right now my brain isn't working properly. X_o

1. No problem! It's just the truth
3/4. XD
5. YAY cant wait!
6. Aw, that sucks. I hate it when brains can't do their jobs properly. Happens to me all the time. X__x

[youeatbugs]

Brains are stupid. D:

[jess-asaur]

Kyah!
That probably wasnt the best word to describe what im feeling right now but its what came to mind!
I LOVE THIS.
You know that feeling you get when your crush or something walks by?
This might be weird to say but i got that feeling xD!
Thats how interested you got me in it o.o
You use amazing descriptive words.
I know they say critisism helps,
but ive got none for you!
Continueeee.

[youeatbugs]

LOL. I love your enthusiasm xD You're epic.

But KYAH! (Also) Thank you so much! ^_____^ I'm so glad you like it!!
I'll hopefully be adding more soon. >] I want to at least write a chapter or two per week x3

[jess-asaur]

O-o;;
Only two a week?
I might die. X-x

Your welcome! :'D
And thanks O:
First time someones ever called me epic
L'ol.

[bowaday_seelah]

Two things.

1. Somehwere in between there.
You've got a small typo here.

2. I stared at her for a moment, not sure how to answer. I don't know why, but just then I could feel the emotions in the pit of my stomache stir, making me feel as though I should combust
I'm pretty sure there's no 'e' in stomach. I could be wrong though.

I really love how this story is turning out. Please post more soon. ^-^

[youeatbugs]

Jess;;
xD It's because my computer is around the corner from my brother's.
His rap music kills my writing mojo. D:
But don't worry, once we start writing in English, I'll be working on this. Soon it'll be more xD
O:! People should call people epic more. That would be epic. XD

Seelah;;
AH! Thank you. And stomach isn't spelled with an E. I don't know why, but I always spelled it like that xD
Thank you so much, once again. ^_^ I'll definetly work on the next chapter soon. :]