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|  Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER FIVE.>> Will someone please read this? ):
I understand. I used to always spell it 'stoumach.' xD
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER FIVE.>> Will someone please read this? ):
WHERES MY CHAPTER 6? Its been a week, buggo.
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Will someone please read this? ):
/Bump Chapter 6 is up now. :]] I skimmed it over and found a few minor mistakes... If there's anymore then just point them out and I'll fix them tomorrow. ^_^ Enjoy! | |||||||
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Please Read. :]
THANK YOUUUU <3 //ReadingRightNow Ill give you feedback in a moment :]
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Please Read. :]
I LOVED IT. Its so sad... I just wanted to hug him to death D: Keep goingggg! Everything I say it true Did you mean is? Thats all i found :]
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Please Read. :]
Yay you wrote more! it was really, really good, but really, really sad. i feel bad for him. ;_; but ur writing skills are genius, i seriously wish i could write the way you do can't wait for more =D | |||||||
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Please Read. :]
Jess;; ^_^ YES! I might start Chapter 7 in a bit, but I'm not sure if I will... Or if I'll even start it, for that matter xD But I will definetly stick to my word and post 1-2 chapters a week! >D Thank you so much! And, yes, thanks for pointing that out x3 It's fixed now~ <3 Mochi;; Haha, the whole story won't be quite this depressing, don't worry xD It's supposed to make you feel what it's truly like to be bullied for looks. :] Albinism is the easiest thing that's... In a way original, I suppose. I've only read one book about it 8D Thank you so much! ;0; I'm so happy you guys like it. :'DD I'm sure you write well! Just need to find something that you have strong feelings for and write! I write about misfits because that's what I live for xD Freaks and geeks~ <3 | |||||||
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| Re: Snow. <<CHAPTER SIX>> Please Read. :]
Thats good  ur totally right! I have never ever read a story about albinism before this. ah, thanks for that tip. Makes sense. shall remember that XD thanks ^^ | |||||||
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