[duskuela]

DYLANNNNN!~
You know I critiqued your poem already, boy. It proooobably comes off as harsh, but that's just cause you know that you're an incroyable poet and I figured you could use something a bit more rough. (;

How you doin'?

[obese]

...That was tough? It didn't seem harsh in the least, plus I love critique, no matter the shape and form.

I've been doing amazing, sick, but amazing...and lonely...hmm, maybe not as amazing as I thought. What about Cat?

[duskuela]

Aw. ): Porque lonely? Like you can't communicate with others, or like lacking in friends. Cause it seems ridiculous that you wouldn't have many amigos. And sick... AS IN SWINE FLU?!??!?!!IJUOI@ D:< Get away, you nastay freak.

I'm pretty good. I think I'm finally out of this huge depression/teenage angst ridiculousness that went on for two or three years. And my poetry somehow got o.k.! Hah.

Have you posted too much on here since I left? I would check your threads but I'm lazeee. I think I wanna go through and comment on everything and bump shiht up. Cause I'm bored and miss reading good poetry by actual people. You'd think that there would be at least one kid in my high school..... But nope! :/

[obese]

None of my Meezy buddies are ever on lonely. I come on here and wait for someone...then they leave. Hmm.

Pff, please, your poetry was always amazing.


I posted a few things, some poetry, and a story that I had to stop because it was far too dark for little Meez. Seems that you didn't luck out in high schools.

[duskuela]

It's cause your awesomeness scares people away, obviously.

AND IT WASN'T! Bahaha, seriously, I look at the poetry I submitted a year ago and it's legit scary. You think that I'm just being modest- but it was ridiculously stereotypical. You know the typical poems that basically own the Poetry forum? That's what they were like.... >.>

I read all of them! Good! You've visibly improved in only three months. Crazy. Are you talking about the tainted rose story? I thought about reading it and then went "oshit 21 pages". And my head kinda exploded all over the thread. Srry bout that. I'll get some MeezJanitors on that.

And high school is just silly. Does anyone ever luck out? Bahahaha.

[obese]

Pff, you're the Queen of Awesomeness.

I've only read your poems from March onward, and I thought that they were pretty good. (And I remember it being March, because March was very special)

Yea, there were two versions, took down the better one, plus it had all of the updates on the first page, if you want I could send you the small bit that I wrote via PM?

Glad that I'm no longer in it. :P

[olivialovs2write]

It's very interesting..you should continue.

[j5fangirl]

OHEMEFFGEE. I have...5 comments.
Thank you guys all so much for commenting, especially since you are all great writers.
I am typing up what I wrote in Math today (I feel writing is a better use of my time) so I may post some more soon.

[duskuela]

I'm crazy about that phrase- "lifeless foliage". (:

[j5fangirl]