[orangejuicey]

One more valiant, doomed attempt at a story.
Tell me if you want me to continue, here's the preface to something I was thinking of.

As the last flickering light bulb finally went out, a girl wandering about forbidden halls was plunged into darkness. She had been expecting this, so no predictable scream ever escaped her lips. The dank, freezing hallways were more terrifying than the darkness. She had had enough experience with the dark to learn not to be afraid of it. Having no flashlight had been procedure. Looking like she had just escaped an asylum, also procedure. The planners of this mission were geniuses, even though they had all knew sending this girl was just an experiment. A distraction. A suicide mission. Of course, she was ignorant to every bit of this part of the plan.

[cash1]

...//OrangejuiceyFangirl
I'd like to see more of this Missy <-<
Oh and...
Every time I see you,I click on your woohoo link <.> I must not be very bright,because I've done it about six different times now,hehe. X]

[orangejuicey]

xDD
//isexcitedtohavefangirls
If I get one more request, I will continue, dearie.
(:

;D
I have that affect on people.
xD

[babygirl41681995]

//WantstobeOrangejuicesfangirl!

this should be good =)
i wanna see more

[cash1]

orangejuicey wrote: xDD //isexcitedtohavefangirls If I get one more request, I will continue, dearie. (: ;D I have that affect on people. xD

...You have another comment <-< >->
I shall be waiting now ;D

[ashac_isback]

This seems fairly decent. With a little more meat on its bones (granted I have only read the little snipit you gave us) it could be quite enjoyable.

[orangejuicey]

First;
The Best Kind Of Trickery

The clouds were roiling threateningly, the rain plopping in fat, heavy drops outside. The storm wasn't halfway through, and already Meris was terrified. She tried to blot out this fear, for she had learned enough to not be afraid. Her instructor's words still rang clearly through her mind, along with the rain.
"Fear will never help you, only slow you down. There is no use in fear, enemies only use it for one purpose. To beat you. You musn't be afraid."
Meris shivered at the memory of the sharp, cold voice. Thankfully, as she heard a crack of thunder, she only heard this storm. But the dark hallway she was submerged in, she assumed, wasn't much better. The light bulb she clutched in her pale palm with a handle was the only light she had, and she knew she was at a huge risk of tripping over the fat orange power cord trailing behind her. The new technology that had been offered wasn't available to the new students at the agency.


Sorry for the shortness...but I'm thinking hard.

[cash1]

Oh my
Can't wait for more!
*Sits down with warm popcorn*

[melissaxoxox]

loooooooooovvveeee it! <3333

[orangejuicey]

Bump??
I promise I'll continue soon...