[panty-pirate]

They danced together under the moonlight. He dipped her gently and she closed her eyes and smiled. He glanced down at her neck. He smiled deviously and bent down towards her. She opened her eyes, still smiling. He hid his teeth quickly and pulled her back up. She closed her eyes again and laid her head on his chest. He breathed deeply through his nose. He turned away from her. “Is something wrong?” she asked with sad puppy dog eyes.

“It’s nothing. I’m just tired,” he sighed. “I should probably go home now.”

“Oh. Okay. Good bye then.”


What you all tink? Plz comment!

[misscolby]

What every ... #@$% have you say#@$%^& like that...................? wtf

[misscolby]

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[panty-pirate]

misscolby wrote: what every ... #@$% have you say#@$%^& like that...................? wtf

sorry, I couldn't tell what you r trying to say? Plz bee moar cleer!

[rawritskate]

Its too short for me to say anything about, could you make it a bit longer?

[panty-pirate]

K, I add mor!


They danced together under the moonlight. He dipped her gently and she closed her eyes and smiled. He glanced down at her neck. He smiled deviously and bent down towards her. She opened her eyes, still smiling. He hid his teeth quickly and pulled her back up. She closed her eyes again and laid her head on his chest. He breathed deeply through his nose. He turned away from her. “Is something wrong?” she asked with sad puppy dog eyes.

“It’s nothing. I’m just tired,” he sighed. “I should probably go home now.”

“Oh. Okay. Good bye then.”

Danny raced down the street toward his house. Jenna sighed. “He’s gone.” She walked through the front door and saw Leann sitting on the counter next to the sink. “Hi.” Jenna whispered.

“Aw, what’s wrong, Gloomy Gus?” Leann asked with a wide smile on her face.

“Oh, look at the time! It’s 2:03! I should be off to bed, see ya!” Jenna said, trying to change the subject.

“Uh uh uh! 1: You need to eat dinner. 2: You can’t change the subject. I’m like the elephant. I don’t forget.” Leann was still smiling and she began making spaghetti.




Thats all I've written so far! =P

[panty-pirate]

Woot woot!

[amethyst_x]

It is interesting but maybe you should make it in bold and make it longer. -high five-
Congrats on how awesome your writing is!!!

[panty-pirate]

Yeah, this is the best thing I've ever written, my stuff usually sucks. We had to write a gothic story in English, and mine was great. Thank you for the compliment

[panty-pirate]

Lalala